tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1572125357353092832.post2333259284261919091..comments2023-07-19T04:30:36.657-07:00Comments on Orangepeel: PAD Challenge Day 5Bruce Niedthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04974369288649730186noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1572125357353092832.post-55608416219862643682012-04-05T19:53:47.409-07:002012-04-05T19:53:47.409-07:00What a tragic telling. I love your pacing with thi...What a tragic telling. I love your pacing with this one. The event unfolds like a slow-motion replay. And that last stanza really allows the poem to leave a haunting impression. Well done.R. Wilder Jr.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03239493083585124344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1572125357353092832.post-25808326309606364042012-04-05T18:04:15.227-07:002012-04-05T18:04:15.227-07:00Oh, Bruce. Chills.
Mine for the baseball prompt e...Oh, Bruce. Chills. <br />Mine for the baseball prompt ended up sad, too. Such dark sides to such a happy American pastime.De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.com