Thursday, April 12, 2012

PAD Challenge Day 11

I'm late - should have posted yesterday, but other matters intervened, namely tax return preparation, which isn't yet completed, and hampered by the fact that my desktop computer has been on the fritz for a few weeks. It's been serviced over the last couple of months, with new parts to the point that it may be a whole new computer before long. No one seems to be able to put their finger on the problem. What a lemon this machine has become, and it's only 15 months old.
Anyway, here's my dual prompt from yesterday, from Poetic Asides and NaPoWriMo: (1) Write a poem with a season in the title, and (2) write a poem that uses the five senses. They seem to fit together pretty well, and my result is a nostalgia/memoir poem that's mostly fictional.


Mercurochrome Summer


The third time I skinned both my knees

the summer I was eight, my mother

just shook her head. You’ll have scabs

on top of your scabs, she sighed,

as she painted them both with Mercurochrome,

that vile red liquid antiseptic that stung

worse than the scrapes themselves.

She eased my pain with a cherry Popsicle,

the sweet and cold in my mouth offsetting

the hot throbbing in my knees. Afterward,

I went outside and showed Danny next door

my war-painted battle scars, then stuck out

my cherry-stained tongue, and told him

I drank some of the Mercurochrome.

Yuck! he cried.


It was a day full of red: Danny’s big sister Julie

sashayed by to show off her new red sundress

and flip hairdo. I told her she looked like Sandra Dee,

but Danny said she smelled like onions. Later,

a fire engine screamed through the neighborhood

when Mr. Berry knocked over his barbecue grill

and set his lawn on fire. Fresh cut grass and charcoal

smell good, but not when they’re put together.


I read in my science class that when the sun

goes down, the reds are the first colors to fade.

By dusk, my knees were no longer bright red,

and evening sounds took over for the colors –

the ice cream man on a late run, mosquitoes

teasing my ears, the Fisker brothers setting off

firecrackers in the woods, my parents watching

Jackie Gleason in the living room. I got ready for bed,

pulling my pajama pants over my tender knees,

which were already beginning to heal.

Tuesday, April 10, 2012

PAD Challange Day 10

Today's dual prompts from Poetic Asides and NaPoWriMo: (1) Write a poem about a forest and/or trees, (2) Steal a first line from a favorite poem (or a random line from any poem) and write a poem based on it. I "stole" from "The Joy of Writing" by Wislawa Szymborska (just read that poem this morning and loved the opening line), and the blooming trees in my yard this week just had to make it into the poem.


Doe

(after Wislawa Szymborska)

“Why does this written doe bound

through these written woods?”

Because she is Joy, and Spring,

and Innocence, and all the metaphors

we can attach to her graceful form.

Because my yard is filled with trees

early this year in their glory –

pink dogwood, weeping cherry,

a blooming apple like a snowstorm.

Because words are her woods,

protecting and nourishing her,

describing her from wet black nose

to impertinent white tail.

Because she feeds on images –

blossoms or bark or tender new leaves.

Because I found her in my yard

early one morning, and interrupted

her grazing, so she loped back into

the meadow mist and waited

for me to write of her again.

Monday, April 9, 2012

PAD Challengs Day 9

Today's prompts from Poetic Asides and NaPoWriMo: (1) Write a poem about something or someone shady, and (2) Write a persona poem. Persona poems are one of my favorite modes to work with, and I actually wrote one not long ago about a "shady" character (i.e. a used car salesman), but here's another shady character:

Identity Thief

I slip from shadow to shadow,
just beyond the corner of your eye
and when the moment presents,
I slip into your virtual pocket
and pick it of numbers,
the digits that make you you –
social security, credit card, phone.

I am havoc, I am paranoia,
I am the beast of deceit ,
and you are my prey.
You’ll sink in credit quicksand
while I use your persona
for a taste of the high life.

Sooner or later, you’ll sort it out,
perhaps with some damage done,
but by the time you catch up,
I will have moved on, a trail of receipts,
overdrafts, and past due bills in my wake,
as I slither into the shadows
of anonymity, and begin again.

Sunday, April 8, 2012

PAD Challenge Day 8

I got a very late start today because of our Easter celebration, but better later than never. Today's prompts from Poetic Asides and NaPoWriMo were (1) Write a poem about being rejected and (2) Take a walk outside and write about your observations. Since I didn't read the second prompt till this evening, it was a bit too late to act properly on it - the closest to a "walk" that I took today was an Easter-related activity around my yard. I also found it hard to reconcile the two prompts today, and the "rejection" reference I made is perfunctory at best. But here it is, for what it's worth:

Easter Morning

At first I’d rejected my wife’s idea

of an Easter egg hunt in our yard for the kids,

the youngest of whom is sixteen.

They’ll think it’s childish, I said.

But she prevailed, so here I am creeping

around my yard at ten a.m. trying to hide

three dozen plastic eggs with prizes inside,

and I discover that the hot pink and orange ones

are the hardest to camouflage. I carry a notebook

and mark the location of each egg,

because at my age it gets harder to remember

details without a list. It’s not such a bad day

to be out here, sunny with a cool breeze.

I plant a blue egg under the boxwood,

a green one inside the rain gutter spout.

I come across my neighbors in the side yard

under my blooming dogwood tree,

dressed to their Easter nines for a family photo.

I send my holiday wishes and make a joke about

my notebook, then continue on my secret mission.

Later, when our guests have arrived, my wife

sends them out to the yard – two teenagers

and four young adults, one in spiked heels –

to hunt for eggs. They have a ball. She was right

after all. As they chatter excitedly about their finds

and the goodies inside them, I look back

at my dogwood, and notice how much it’s grown.

Saturday, April 7, 2012

PAD Challenge Day 7

I really like both today's prompts from NaPoWriMo and Poetic Asides: (1) Write a poem in which everything is the same color, and (2) Write a poem in which two (or more) people interact without speaking. Here's my result:

Red Smile

He is riding the Red Line to work,

despite the morning urge to call in sick –

not under the weather, just tired

of the day-to-day grind, and not that far

from retirement. He lowers his newspaper

and finds a striking young Latin woman

opposite him. Her dress is as red as her lipstick,

her hair is a dark waterfall. Their eyes connect

and she flashes a warm smile. He smiles back.

He can feel his face flush red. He knows she’s

not flirting, because he’s not much to look at.

It was just a “good morning” smile,

a “have a nice day” smile that seems to come

naturally to her. Maybe she uses it all day

at her job as a receptionist or concierge,

or even a model. Their eyes don’t meet again;

she gets off two stops later, and he gets off

the stop after that. When he hits the street,

everything red speaks to him: sporty cars

whizzing through intersections, neon signs

on storefronts, some umbrellas that glide

through this drizzly morning. He carries

that red smile with him throughout the day,

and once in a while at his dreary desk,

he smiles back.

Friday, April 6, 2012

PAD Challenge Day 6

Today's dual prompt from NaPoWriMo and Poetic Asides: (1) write a poem about an animal (in the style of one of Marianne Moore's animal poems if you wish), and (2) write a poem about something hiding or hidden. That shouldn't be hard since so many animals have some method of "hiding" for defense or to lie in wait for prey. I used Moore's "The Fish" as a model for today's poem (perhaps more for form than content), and the trap door spider, one of nature's masters of camouflage and hiding (of which there are several species, by the way) as my subject.


Trap Door Spider

hide

deep inside

a long tunnel that you dug

and lined with silk, a deadly rug

the better for slipping up and down to

catch

from your hatch

camouflaged door, no welcome mat

D-shaped, silk-hinged, false floor that

dooms the unsuspecting creature

who

crawled or flew

oblivious to your pinching maw

to be cracked open by your jaw

some leftovers mixed with spit

food

for your brood

of spiderlings, crawling blind

while you, one of a single mind

lie in wait for the next meal to

snap

in your trap,

eight-legged deadly jack-in-the-box

a brutal denizen who mocks

our placid life, our naïve trust

to

walk through

our surroundings and not suspect

there’s any reason to protect

ourselves from such a hungry world.

Thursday, April 5, 2012

PAD Challenge Day 5

First of all, thanks to Maureen Thorson and NaPoWriMo for the shout-out and selecting me as blog for "Blog of the Day"! I'm glad you all liked my Day 4 blues poem.

Today is Opening Day of the baseball season, a holiday for any avid baseball fan. My Phillies opened the season today by beating the Pirates 1-0, thanks to another pitching gem from Roy Halladay (8 innings of 2-hit shutout ball), who has now been the starter for ten consecutive Opening Days. In honor of the day, NaPoWriMo's prompt is to write a baseball poem. Needless to say, I've written several (one of which was published last year in the literary baseball magazine Spitball), so this prompt is a piece of cake for me. But as usual, I'm adding the prompt from Poetic Asides, which is to write about something "before your time." That begs a historical baseball poem, and the topic I chose seems a bit "dark" for such a celebratory day, but here it is for what it's worth.


Polo Grounds, August 16, 1920

As you lay on the ground, Ray,

on that terrible afternoon,

blood oozed from your ear.


Mays had delivered his submarine pitch,

hurling the muddy, stained baseball

through the twilight from mound to plate.

They say you didn’t even see the ball,

which is why you didn’t move as the pitch

cut in on you. When Mays heard the crack,

and the ball squibbed back to him,

he thought he’d heard the bat, not your skull,

and he threw to first for the putout.

You managed to stumble to your feet,

then collapsed again, and they rushed you

to the hospital, where you died hours later.

They all took off their caps for you,

Ray Chapman, as you passed through

this game into the next.


Before you left for the road trip from Cleveland

to New York, you and your young wife took a look

at the new house being built for you.

She was expecting your first child,

and you told her you would retire soon

to raise your family, and join the family business.

If only they had helmets back then,

you would have had the chance.