Today's prompt from Robert Lee Brewer: Write a "response" poem. I chose to "respond" to William Carlos Williams' "This is Just to Say", his famous short poem written as a note to his wife about eating the plums in the refrigeator:
This is Just to Say
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold
I've riffed on and parodied this poem several times over the years, just because I love its simplicity so much. But I don't think I ever wrote a "response" to it, and I thought one in the voice of Mrs. Williams might be fun, using the short form I've been employing all month.
This is Just to Answer
Your Note
I
was saving
those sweet plums
to
make you
a fruit tart
but
you ate
every last one
yet
somehow I
love you anyway
incidentally, no one
says "icebox" anymore
was saving
those sweet plums
make you
a fruit tart
you ate
every last one
somehow I
love you anyway
says "icebox" anymore
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