Little Elegy
The little things she left behind -
pearl earrings, hand-scrawled recipe -
again I have her on my mind,
the little things. She left behind
some trinkets, but I wish I'd find
her giant heart, her legacy.
The little things she left behind -
pearl earrings, hand-scrawled recipe.
I'm going to post this older poem here, too, because it fits the NaPoWriMo prompt so perfectly.This one won a "Poetic Form" contest several years ago on the Poetic Asides blog, and was published in Writer's Digest. It's a French refrain form called the quatern. This one, too, was indirectly inspired by the passing of my mother-in-law, but it's in the voice of a grieving husband.
I'm going to post this older poem here, too, because it fits the NaPoWriMo prompt so perfectly.This one won a "Poetic Form" contest several years ago on the Poetic Asides blog, and was published in Writer's Digest. It's a French refrain form called the quatern. This one, too, was indirectly inspired by the passing of my mother-in-law, but it's in the voice of a grieving husband.
Purple Heart
I gave away your clothes last week.
A truck rolled up and took six bags
to some forsaken warehouse where
they’d be passed on to people who
A truck rolled up and took six bags
to some forsaken warehouse where
they’d be passed on to people who
cannot afford to buy them new.
I gave away your clothes. Last week
I couldn’t stand the closet full
of coats and dresses, hung like ghosts
I gave away your clothes. Last week
I couldn’t stand the closet full
of coats and dresses, hung like ghosts
and so I yanked them off their racks,
stuffed plastic bags with memories
I gave away. Your clothes, last week,
went to a world that never knew
how fine you were, how beautiful
stuffed plastic bags with memories
I gave away. Your clothes, last week,
went to a world that never knew
how fine you were, how beautiful
in that red dress, that silken blouse
some stranger walks the street in now.
I gave away your clothes last week.
some stranger walks the street in now.
I gave away your clothes last week.
1 comment:
Bruce: nice job. I like how you split the refrain into separate sentences!
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