Todays' dual prompts from Write Better Poetry and NaPoWriMo: (1) Write a "remix" poem, and (2) write a poem in the form of a "duplex sonnet," created by poet Jericho Brown. Maureen Thorson of NaPoWriMo describes it this way:
Like a typical sonnet, a duplex has fourteen lines. It’s organized into seven, two-line stanzas. The second line of the first stanza is echoed by (but not identical to) the first line of the second stanza, the second line of the second stanza is echoed by (but not identical to) the first line of the third stanza, and so on. The last line of the poem is the same as the first.
(There appears to be no specific rule for rhyme or meter, but I used unrhymed iambic pentameter, a.k.a. blank verse, for this one.)
The moon is out looking for trouble
and everyone's here....
―Elbow, "Open Arms"
You woke this morning―you were not on fire.
You need no ladder to climb out the window.
You leave a window open, bring a backpack.
The conductor asks to see your ticket home.
Back home they've unfurled the colored banners,
They've strung and tested all the colored lights.
When you arrive a little late, the lights are on,
The moon is rising in three-quarter time,
They sing a song the moon would know by heart,
And hoist a brew to you―they spill some foam.
The night careens along on foam and moonshine,
You sing through open windows till they close.
You need no ladder to climb in the window―
You wake this morning and you're not on fire.
3 comments:
Wonderful piece-- straight to the gut.
Thank you so much! I saw on your web page that Billy Collins read your poetry on his Poetry Broadcast. How cool! I had the pleasure of taking his workshop in Key West a few years ago - a very enjoyable experience.
Bruce, wonderful poem. First time I've done a duplex ... reminds me a bit of pantoums. You do a great job with the form.
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