Today's prompts from Writer's Digest and NaPoWriMo: (1) Write a "response" poem, and (2) "...craft your own poem that recounts an experience of driving/riding and singing, incorporating a song lyric."
I've written a few poems before on this theme, and probably my favorite poem ever about music in the car is "Roy Orbison's Last Three Notes," a Pushcart Prize-winning poem by my New Jersey poet friend B.J. Ward. You can read it here. My poem is about singing to an old R&B tune from 1974 that somehow escaped my ears when it first came out, but since I discovered it a few years ago, it's become a favorite. It's less than three minutes long, but it only needs that long to establish a memorable groove. (The title of the poem is also the title of the song.)
and when they open this old one-hit wonder,
I’m hooked every time. The name
has been lost in the shuffle of music history,
partly because he left that world
and returned to his job as a draftsman.
But his groove became timeless.
Diggin’ the scene with a gangsta lean,
Woo-ooh-ooh…
It’s a song about having and having-not,
and I’m somewhere in-between.
You may not drive a great big Cadillac,
it says, but you can still stand tall.
You can try to better yourself,
have a dream and find a way to get there,
without stepping on others along the way,
but don’t forget to count your blessings.
in the song. I don’t do the “gangsta lean”
When I drive. The driving instructor’s
“10 o’clock and 2 o’clock”
is still too ingrained in me.
But when I creep through these city streets
in my beat-up old Honda Civic
with the stereo blasting that slow-jam chorus,
Diggin’ the scene with a gangsta lean,
Woo-ooh-ooh…
if someone says,
“Who’s that O.G. brotha playing that song?”
I’d like to lean out the window
with a smile, and say, “That’s me, y’all.”
2 comments:
What a fun poem, Bruce! Good use of the lyrics. I'm gonna go listen to the song now.
Thanks for catching up! I always appreciate your comments.
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