Today's prompt from Write Better Poetry is to write a poem using at least three of the following six words:
NaPoWriMo's prompt is: "Begin by reading Sarah Gambito’s poem “Grace.” Now, choose an abstract noun from the list below, and then use that as the title for a poem that contains very short lines, and at least one invented word."
Glory
Courage
Anxiety
Failure
Defeat
Delight
Confusion
Calm
Belief
Cleverness
Despair
Honesty
Deceit
Strength
Well, well, well. This perfect storm of prompts practically invites me to write in one of my favorite forms, the Hay(na)ku. Six words, short lines, six-words poems - it's on! I've sung the praises of the hay(na)ku and shared many of them on this blog before (and I have a published chapbook of them, Knit Our Broken Bones), but if you are not familiar with the form, read an explanation from its creator, Eileen Tabios, here.
So here is my "hay(na)ku chain" which combines all of the prompts. Each individual hay(na)ku contains one of Robert's prompt words. The title, the short lines and invented word for Maureen's NaPoWriMo prompt are all there too.
last night
shot on Park
mother can't
kiss his wounds
saw blood
on the concrete
leaned against
her sister's shoulder
won't bow
to this guncalypse
morning tears
on her lawn
3 comments:
A poignant poem. All these shootings break my heart.
Bruce: sorry, behind commenting. Dude, this is an incredible poem. You really grabbed on to the six words thing in a couple different ways. Sad poem. Really well done. Send it out! --V.
Thanks Vince. Your comments are always worth the wait. Yeah, I feel like this is one is one of my best of the month. Viva Hay(na)ku!
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