First of all, I want to wish a happy 84th birthday to former US Poet Laureate and Facebook friend Ted Kooser. who generously shares new poems on his page. He's maxed out on friends there, but you can certainly follow him and read all his wonderful poems.
Today's prompts from Write Better Poetry and NaPoWriMo: (1)Write a "dream" and/or "reality" poem, and (2) "write a love poem, one that names at least one flower, contains one parenthetical statement, and in which at least some lines break in unusual places." This prompt was inspired by the e.e. cummings poem [somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond], so I carried some of that whimsy and non-capitalization with me when I wrote this poem. The unusual line breaks - just one word at the end of each stanza - took on a kind of form, reminding me of the hay(na)ku I like to write - or more accurately, reverse hay(na)ku. I've been obsessed with this very pretty annual flower that I hadn't been aware of before, whose name took me a few minutes to figure out how to pronounce properly.
P.S.: "Million bells" (see line 5) is another name for Calibrachoa.
but I didn't know how to pronounce
them
a million trailing bells, a riot of
color
blue, pink and white and
red
and I bought enough to fill your
bathtub
yards
to share them all over
town
and a tall man standing on the
corner
of the street to the song of
colors
over
cal-i-bra-KO-ah)
right
music
poetry
straight to the garden shop
and
basket of calibrachoa I could
find
at me because when I said it
right
poetry
8 comments:
This is so great. What wonderful images, and terrific storytelling.
Lovely!
Hi Rosemary, and thanks!
In case you didn't get the pingback yesterday, I invite you to read my cento for which I used lines from 30 poems written this month, including this one by you. Thank you for the words.
https://manjameximexcessive6.wordpress.com/2023/04/28/day-28-index-2023/
Just read it and loved it. Thanks for including me.
What a lovely poem. Good play on the word Calibrachoa, esp the end where it becomes, appropriately, poetry. Form-wise, I thought the poem's single word at the end of each stanza put me in mind of "The Red Wheelbarrow." Bravo!
Thanks Vince. It means a lot that you liked it so much.
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