Today's prompts from Poetic Asides and NaPoWriMo: (1) Write a poem about a problem, and (2)write a poem about space or spaces, with a focus on a personal experience. I’ve only
had one MRI so far in my life, and while it made me uncomfortable, I didn’t
have a panic attack like some people have reported. Still, I put myself in the
shoes (or hospital booties, if you will) of someone who had such an experience.
This villanelle came out sounding somewhat Poe-like, I think.
MRI
We'll find your
problem soon, the doctor said,
You'll get an MRI so
we can trace
what's wrong with you
- it could be in your head.
He told me to lie down upon this bed,
and soon it slid into a tunneled space,
We'll find your
problem soon, the doctor said.
Supine, I was enclosed, I felt the dread
creep in on me. My
heart began to race -
What's wrong with me? It
could be in my head.
I was entombed, my lungs felt filled with lead,
my breath was short. You
must lie still, in case
we find your problem
soon, the doctor said.
A tumor in the brain? My fears were fed -
inside this loud cocoon, they'd find the place
that's wrong with me - it could be in my head.
At last I was exhumed, back from the dead;
Their pictures were the verdict I must face.
We found your problem,
son, the doctor said;
There's nothing wrong
with you - it's in your head.
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