Red Smile
He is riding the Red Line to work,
despite the morning urge to call in sick –
not under the weather, just tired
of the day-to-day grind, and not that far
from retirement. He lowers his newspaper
and finds a striking young Latin woman
opposite him. Her dress is as red as her lipstick,
her hair is a dark waterfall. Their eyes connect
and she flashes a warm smile. He smiles back.
He can feel his face flush red. He knows she’s
not flirting, because he’s not much to look at.
It was just a “good morning” smile,
a “have a nice day” smile that seems to come
naturally to her. Maybe she uses it all day
at her job as a receptionist or concierge,
or even a model. Their eyes don’t meet again;
she gets off two stops later, and he gets off
the stop after that. When he hits the street,
everything red speaks to him: sporty cars
whizzing through intersections, neon signs
on storefronts, some umbrellas that glide
through this drizzly morning. He carries
that red smile with him throughout the day,
and once in a while at his dreary desk,
he smiles back.
3 comments:
I love it. The smallest things do stick with us, and even influence our entire perspective. Colors do this particularly I've noticed (like not noticing a kind or color of car until you own one). You caught this perspective really well. An enjoyable read.
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I really liked that. Thanks!
Madeleine Begun Kane
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