Monday, April 18, 2022

PAD Day 18: The Escaped Bicycle

 Today's dual prompts from Write Better Poetry and NaPoWriMo: (1) Write a poem with the title "We ______," and (2) "write your own poem that provides five answers to the same question – without ever specifically identifying the question that is being answered." 

For some reason I though about Neruda's wonderful The Book of Questions, a collection of short (mostly two-line) poetic questions that often veer toward the metaphysical, and are, for the most part, difficult or impossible to answer. (There's a new edition coming out that is beautifully illustrated, like a children's book.) The prompt from NaPoWriMo says we shouldn't reveal the question that we are answering, but I will break that rule and share it here: "How did the abandoned bicycle/win its freedom?" This is written as a string of hay(na)ku, a short form I love and have used many times - I actually have a chapbook of them coming out soon. (Although the fourth and fifth stanzas may not read like direct answers to the question, they seemed to be a logical progression of the images I was trying to create here.)


We Find the Escaped Bicycle
 
It
chewed right
through the lock.
 
It
rolled away
from human hands.
 
It
wears rust
like a medal.
 
But
its tires
need air, reassurance.
 
And
its chain
droops with sorrow.


2 comments:

Misky said...

Fun response.

Vince Gotera said...

Bruce, the question didn't have to be said ... it's very clear from the poem. "Hay(na)ku string" is an interesting label. The "official" name is "chained hay(na)ku" but I've resisted that nomenclature a bit because it feels restrictive somehow. With this particular poem of yours, "string" goes along with the whimsy of it. Very nice.