Today's dual prompts from Poetic Asides and NaPoWriMo: (1) write a poem about "metrics" (or, I presume, a poem in metrics), and (2) take a favorite poem, pick out one concrete noun from it, do five minutes of free writing from it, then make a new poem from the result.
For the first time all month, I wasn't able to combine both prompts into one poem. But that means I have two new poems for today. Here's the first:
A Metric Poem
We sometimes run kilometers
(5K is popular here).
We drink our Coke in liters,
and water, but not beer.
We briefly employed Celsius
(also known as Centigrade)
to tell just how hot we were,
but that trend began to fade.
We are a land of miles and feet,
and we're mostly metric-free.
If you're looking for a meter,
you'll still find it in poetry.
And yet, that's not quite true of Frost,
who talked of promises kept,
but not kilometers he must go
before he finally slept.
And here's my response to the NaPoWriMo prompt:
No White Chickens
wheelbarrow
you sat inverted,
forlorn
in the garage all winter
until now,
hauled out for spring
and you have seen many -
chipped red paint
one screw lost from the frame
a handle grip gone
when I push you empty
your bed bounces up and down
with a metal clatter
your wheel
slightly bent
has a slight wobble
you are rusting because
like Dr. Bill's wheelbarrow
you were left in the rain
but you still can haul
soil, or mulch, or plants
into the garden
you carry
that musty fresh earth smell
back and forth
unlike your famous cousin
you don't sit beside
the white chickens
but you are more alike
because so much does depend
on you
1 comment:
Two fine poems. Especially appreciated the WCW reference. I used the same poem as a starting point myself today: https://rlavalette.wordpress.com/2017/04/29/30-in-30-27-free-verse/
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