I took Robert's prompt a step further: I compiled the last lines from all 22 poems I've written so far this month, and used as many of them as I could, with a few editorial changes. I promised myself to create a poem entirely of these last lines, except for the very last line which would be new. Here is my list of last lines, in no particular order (although I did tinker with their order a bit to get ideas on how they would fit together):
Look, the Old Fart Has a Hobby
he has just
destroyed below
the loom still
running
after they plow
your stump under
who just had nothing left in the tank
will soon be bare
in the end
on my no-fly list of vegetables
I love your
flavor
who want to
interpret your dreams
and jumping
out of it when they do
drifts over
the middle stripe in the road
into whatever
utopia you've imagined
but know some
words just sound like babble
over the
telephone
they looked
like tears
please save your laments
I'm not done climbing
yet
I should have taken better care of
myself
and maybe I feel guilty, but I'm smiling too
the saying
would be, "The early worm gets the bird."
Just you wait
- I’ll Make the Empire Great Again!
...and here is the poem that came out of them. I actually used seventeen last lines (again, with some minor changes), and the title uses parts of two other lines. I guess it's a "rebel" poem in the same sense as Dylan Thomas's "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night".
The Old Fart Flips the Bird
You may be destroyed
below
while the loom
is still running.
After they
plow your stump under,
you, who have
nothing left in the tank,
will soon be
bare in the end.
You should
have taken better care of yourself,
and maybe you
feel guilty, but you're smiling too.
If they want
to interpret your dreams,
jump out of
them when they do.
Drift over the
middle stripe in the road
into whatever
utopia you've imagined,
but know some
words just sound like babble
over the
telephone.
Tell them, please save your laments-
I'm not done climbing yet.
They may look
like tears
but you love
their flavor
and the last
laugh is the ultimate joke.
2 comments:
Bruce, this is brilliant. A self-cento of sorts. Bravo1
"Self-cento" - I like that! Thanks, Vince.
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